Akiko

Hmm, you may want to have a bit more of a dividing point between the different parts of the body. While I do like how she is kind of all over the place it is pretty difficult to tell what parts of her body I am looking at.

Even after it is explained I kind of have a bit of trouble, however I will say I like the coloring of her body and the effects of her hair.

The eye is also a nice color, I do wish there was more of a background, even if it would have been a single solid color.